1tn Heb “their brothers the Jews.”

2tn Heb “take” (so also in v. 3).

3tn Heb “for the tax of the king.”

4tn Heb “according to the flesh of our brothers is our flesh.”

5tn Heb “like their children, our children.”

6tn Heb “to become slaves” (also later in this verse).

7tn Heb “there is not power for our hand.” The Hebrew expression used here is rather difficult.

8sn The poor among the returned exiles were being exploited by their rich countrymen. Moneylenders were loaning large amounts of money, and not only collecting interest on loans which was illegal (Lev 25:36-37; Deut 23:19-20), but also seizing pledges as collateral (Neh 5:3) which was allowed (Deut 24:10). When the debtors missed a payment, the moneylenders would seize their collateral: their fields, vineyards and homes. With no other means of income, the debtors were forced to sell their children into slavery, a common practice at this time (Neh 5:5). Nehemiah himself was one of the moneylenders (Neh 5:10), but he insisted that seizure of collateral from fellow Jewish countrymen was ethically wrong (Neh 5:9).

9tn Heb “words.”

10tn Heb “my heart was advised upon me.”

11tn Heb “nobles.”

12tn Heb “taking a creditor’s debt.” The Hebrew noun מַשָּׁא (masha’) means “interest; debt” and probably refers to the collateral (pledge) collected by a creditor (HALOT 641-42 s.v.). This particular noun form appears only in Nehemiah (5:7, 10; 10:32); however, it is related to מַשָּׁאָה (mashaah, “contractual loan; debt; collateral”) which appears elsewhere (Deut 24:10; Prov 22:26; cf. Neh 5:11). See the note on the word “people” at the end of v. 5. The BHS editors suggest emending the MT to מָשָׂא (masa’, “burden”), following several medieval Hebrew MSS; however, the result is not entirely clear: “you are bearing a burden, a man with his brothers.”

13tn Heb “his brothers.”

14tn Heb “I gave.”

15tn Heb “our brothers, the Jews.”

16tn Heb “your brothers.”

17tc The translation reads with the Qere and the ancient versions וָאוֹמַר (vaomar, “and I said”) rather than the MT Kethib, וַיֹּאמֶר (vayyomer, “and he said”).

18tn Heb “not good.” The statement “The thing…is not good” is an example of tapeinosis, a figurative expression which emphasizes the intended point (“The thing…is wrong!”) by negating its opposite.

19tn Heb “[should you not] walk.”

20tn Heb “brothers.”

21tn Heb “lads.”

22tn Heb “this debt.” This expression is a metonymy of association: “debt” refers to the seizure of the collateral of the debt.

23tc The MT reads וּמְאַת (um˙at, “and the hundredth”) which is somewhat enigmatic. The BHS editors suggest emending to וּמַשַּׁאת (umashat, “and the debt”) which refers to the interest or collateral (pledge) seized by a creditor (Deut 24:10; Prov 22:26; see HALOT 641-42 s.v. מַשָּׁא). The term מַשַּׁאת (mashat) is related to the noun מָשָּׁא (masha’, “debt”) in 5:7, 10.

24tn The words “these things” are not included in the Hebrew text, but have been supplied in the translation for clarity.

25tn Heb “took an oath from them”; the referents (the wealthy and the officials, cf. v. 7) have been specified in the translation for clarity.

26tn Heb “according to this word.”

27tn Heb “my bosom.”

28tn Heb “cause to stand.”

29tn Heb “according to this word.”

30tc The BHS editors suggest reading צֻוֵּאתִי (tsuvveti, “and I was appointed”) rather than the reading of the MT, אֹתִי צִוָּה (tsivvah oti, “he appointed me”).

31tc The translation reads with one medieval Hebrew MS פֶּחָה (pekhah, “governor”) rather than פֶּחָם (pekham, “their governor”) of the MT. One would expect the form with pronominal suffix to have a tav (ת) before the suffix.

32tn Heb “brothers.”

33tn Heb “the food of the governor.” Cf. v. 18.

34tc The Hebrew term אַחַר (’akhar) is difficult here. It normally means “after,” but that makes no sense here. Some scholars emend it to אַחַד (’akhad) and supply the word “day,” which yields the sense “daily.” Cf. TEV “40 silver coins a day for food and wine.”

35tn Heb “we did not purchase.”

36tn Heb “who were gathered around us at my table.”

37tn Or “from the Gentiles.” The same Hebrew word can refer to “the Gentiles” or “the nations.” Cf. the phrase in 6:16.